aworthyboyishe
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Theatre Critic Needed:DSo, I'm an aspiring playwright. I've been little stuff since about 8th grade, and I'm currently writing my first adult play. It deals with some pretty heavy stuff, so I didn't want to post it direct to the forum. I do however need some criticism. So.. anybody that would like to help me out, I'd love you forever.
Annnnnd, here's the questionable subject matter, just so you know what you're getting into.
Mental Disorders
Homosexuality
Teenage Sex
Prostitution
Abusive Relationships
So... just post here, or PM me. And I'll send you the script so far.
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Astonishingg
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I'll lend an eye or two.
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kozafluitmusique
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I'll read it, I guess...if you need someone to read it.
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bittenbythetheatrebug
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Send it on, I'd be glad to help out! 
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MiSS.DRAMAqueen
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OHH OHH !
i wanna read =)
i love questionable material. 
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aworthyboyishe
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Sent ^^
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kozafluitmusique
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How did you send it?
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Salome
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because you know SO much about theatre.,.. you thought Sunny Von Bulow was an actress!
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aworthyboyishe
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Well.. Anybody's opinion is always nice. I'm not so much interested in whether its quality theatre yet, I'm just worried about whether or not the story is acceptable, and believable. 
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kozafluitmusique
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| Salome wrote: | | because you know SO much about theatre.,.. you thought Sunny Von Bulow was an actress! |
Excuse me. I know a LOT more than you think but I am still learning. And no, she's not an actress.
And just because you got a small part doesn't mean you should whine about it all the time.
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aworthyboyishe
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-gives up his attempts at diplomacy-
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Salome
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| kozafluitmusique wrote: | | Salome wrote: | | because you know SO much about theatre.,.. you thought Sunny Von Bulow was an actress! |
Excuse me. I know a LOT more than you think but I am still learning. And no, she's not an actress.
And just because you got a small part doesn't mean you should whine about it all the time. |
no i'm not concerned about the way a high school kid casts me on line. i am pissed off because people like you dont even pretend to know a show before commenting on it..casting it, or rating it against another one.
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musialman
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please send it. I love scriptreading and the show sounds interesting 
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sylvesterm11
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Yeah, I'd love to read it I actually want to go to school for journalism (and eventually become a theatre critic!) So... you know, just some practice  PM it to me!
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aworthyboyishe
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I sent it to you last two!
Hope you like it:D
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aworthyboyishe
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I finished the final scene!
Thats not to say that theres not lots of stuff in the middle to write, but I finished the finale.
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