[Singer]

Hello, everyone!
After I posted my first recording of "I Can't Say No" here, I received some very helpful critiques, which I tried to apply when I recorded this song again. This is my new and hopefully improved version of "I Can't Say No"
http://media.putfile.com/I-Caint-Say-No-31

Now, to round it off, here is my version of "Many A New Day". I know first off that there are a few timing problems, but those are caused by not being able to hear the music that well. For some reason, I couldn't get the track loud enough!
http://media.putfile.com/Many-A-New-Day-62

Please do tell me what you think! I really value your opinions.
Thank you!

[xsophiex]

I loved your version of "Many a new day".
You articulated very well, and I could hear the acting through your voice. (If that makes any sense)
That was my favourite. I felt the character came out very well through the song.

"I can't say no"
I loved it. Again I like how you spoke your words.
I felt you where more concerned about the accent than making it funny though.

Apart from that both great.
Far more acted out than just sung than the last one version of it you did.

Well done.

[Singer]

Thank you so much! What an encouraging critique!
I'm not sure what to do about making it funny, though. I thought I was making it funny! I guess comedy just doesn't come that naturally to me.
I'll keep at it, though!